Poem from long ago and now

[avad]

STILL YOU WALK


Still you walk the ancient pathways
Wander through

beloved temples

Greet your loved ones, gods, companions

Still you walk.


Beneath your feet we reconfigure.

Assemble patterns

Around, within you

During the very blinks of your eyes


When you have traced the lines

about one million times

When you can see the drawing from above and

Within


And when in one moment

(which is in all moments-

inherent possibility)

You comprehend...


The story cannot continue in words.

Comments

[sweetrevlation.livejournal.com]

wow... i love this.
the meaning of each weighted phrase has endless possibilities.

[mirabehn.livejournal.com]

That is beautiful. Thank you so much for posting it. :)

[sendao.livejournal.com]

It's always a pleasure to step into the world you see all around you, Dar. I wish I had your artistic eyes.

*stares at you blankly, holding a sharp-looking spoon*

such pretty, pretty eyes...

mm, eyes...

nummy...

"huummmmmm..."

[rokkitz.livejournal.com]

thanks for inviting us all on a walk
through your cortical gardens
over arching spiral paths
to the gateway of the last period
and into the hinterlands beyond

hey, do you hear that sound too?

g

[supertofu.livejournal.com]

Loved it, your a good one.

Don't have much time to comment.

The heuristic nature of the biological process and development of the nervous system, especially the grey web and the seeming miracle or illusion of comprehension. First comprehension or any understanding?

Thanks

[unluckymonkey.livejournal.com]

OOo YES! THAT! Are we forming little spirals?